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tbird said ago:
Better but I think you meant to use the 1. peasants 2. chance. Keep working and writing and edit your words and then submit to the GALLERY. Thanks
 
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PicLits.com said ago:
The author edited this PicLit, so we removed the ratings up until now.
 
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tbird said ago:
Terrific imagination and story. You have some spelling errors that make it difficult to read. Also, punctuation is a problem. See if you can get a teacher or friend to edit this or point out the errors so that next time it will be perfect. Thanks
 

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