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dance awesome said ago:
confused
 
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batman123 said ago:
that was...EPIC i loved it
 
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laura703 said ago:
it doesn't make sense why do you cry
 
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Amazing Stuff Eh said ago:
Maybe you should just edit out the third line cuz it doesn't really fit.
 
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Jesse K. Granger said ago:
y u cry???????????????????????????????????????????????????
 
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Monster Hunter Tri Player said ago:
Awesommeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol
 
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Mrs.H said ago:
Sometimes one cries when happy.
 
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DISkids said ago:
i love the description
 
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SophieRuns said ago:
I liked it until the "I cry like a tiny baby." I just don't get that...
 
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RCMaster said ago:
Sweet. The only thing I do not get is why you would cry.
 
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cute-dana-love said ago:
awsome
 
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lakergirl said ago:
Great job! One question...why would you cry?
 
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pianoperson said ago:
4 Stars!!!!!!
 
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sas15 said ago:
that is simply untrue but exellent
 
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Annabeth Chase said ago:
Simply marvelous!!!
 
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techgirl said ago:
Excellent use of figurative language!
 

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