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tbird said ago:
This is a terrific poem. You started with a 'simile' and ended with rhythmical words e.g. knees and fees. Definitely share this with friends (e-mail). KEEP writing. Cheers.
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Ka Tangi Hoki Ko Au said ago:
I like this one too Ala I really like the line "puffy material etching my knees... I bet that material really is scratchy!! Looks lovely though. Well done Ms Squires

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